Elizabeth, I think the strongest of these photos is your first one, I can see some blurring but might recommend you take it a step further. Other than that, I'm not really sure the images on the shallow are strong enough. I can see the proper technique in the plant photo but I'm not sure I find the photo itself intriguing enough. The fish photo also has a good sense of blurring but I'm not sure it's a captivating enough photo. On your completely out of focus ones, I'm most drawn to your skull photo. That photo has an interesting subject and I think that is important. Keep with stuff like that. Good work!
Elizabeth,
ReplyDeleteI think the strongest of these photos is your first one, I can see some blurring but might recommend you take it a step further. Other than that, I'm not really sure the images on the shallow are strong enough. I can see the proper technique in the plant photo but I'm not sure I find the photo itself intriguing enough. The fish photo also has a good sense of blurring but I'm not sure it's a captivating enough photo. On your completely out of focus ones, I'm most drawn to your skull photo. That photo has an interesting subject and I think that is important. Keep with stuff like that. Good work!