Hi Emil! I think my favorite image of yours is your first gray photo. When I looked at some of our classmates’ work, a lot of the gray images are particularly bright, but I like that this is a deeper tone. It almost has an ominous feel to it, which I think is intriguing and begs a handful of questions. I will say that I’m not sure your second gray photo hits the mark. Because the subject matter revolves around the clouds in the background, I can’t help but compare it to the clouds in the previous one and feel that the second is weaker. I might replace it. I also enjoy the image of the horse, but it feels a bit busy to overexpose it with a sort of vignette texture. I’d try to look for something simpler so that the sharp lines will serve the overexposure better. I think the horse photo could be saved for another assignment and would be curious to see what it looks like without the white!
Hi Emil, i really enjoyed looking at your images. I think my favorites are you grey ones because the clouds in the back make them both very dramatic and sort of tell a story. I think you almost white and almost black photos are great as well. Personally, I have some trouble seeing what's going on in the black photographs so I would lighten both of them more so we can see them better. As for the white images, I think they're very strong, but a little over exposed.
Hi Emil. We kind of talked about these, but I would scrap your Black and White images and go back to the drawing board. Find subject that is already leaning in that direction on the exposure scale and then emphasis that in the processing. I would also flatten your Gray images out a bit. They currently have too much black in them. Good Luck!
I really love how created some dynamic images even with the limited pallet. I really like your grey images especially and find that they have a dramatic flair to them with a good mix of tones. I think for your first white image it might be interesting to try and capture something with even more movement!
Hi Emil! I think my favorite image of yours is your first gray photo. When I looked at some of our classmates’ work, a lot of the gray images are particularly bright, but I like that this is a deeper tone. It almost has an ominous feel to it, which I think is intriguing and begs a handful of questions. I will say that I’m not sure your second gray photo hits the mark. Because the subject matter revolves around the clouds in the background, I can’t help but compare it to the clouds in the previous one and feel that the second is weaker. I might replace it. I also enjoy the image of the horse, but it feels a bit busy to overexpose it with a sort of vignette texture. I’d try to look for something simpler so that the sharp lines will serve the overexposure better. I think the horse photo could be saved for another assignment and would be curious to see what it looks like without the white!
ReplyDeleteHi Emil, i really enjoyed looking at your images. I think my favorites are you grey ones because the clouds in the back make them both very dramatic and sort of tell a story. I think you almost white and almost black photos are great as well. Personally, I have some trouble seeing what's going on in the black photographs so I would lighten both of them more so we can see them better. As for the white images, I think they're very strong, but a little over exposed.
ReplyDeleteHi Emil. We kind of talked about these, but I would scrap your Black and White images and go back to the drawing board. Find subject that is already leaning in that direction on the exposure scale and then emphasis that in the processing. I would also flatten your Gray images out a bit. They currently have too much black in them. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteI really love how created some dynamic images even with the limited pallet. I really like your grey images especially and find that they have a dramatic flair to them with a good mix of tones. I think for your first white image it might be interesting to try and capture something with even more movement!
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