Nice work overall! The almost white photos are natural in which they can just be taken without being edited. Th second almost grey photo is real in terms of craft and composition, however, it seems a little over edited. Perhaps take a photo of the same site in a different weather condition when it's foggy? The second almost black photo is natural, like your other photos, but still a bit blurry in terms of the subject matter.
Hi Elizabeth. I think we covered most of my concerns in class on Tuesday. I would encourage you to continue to photograph and try to create much more interesting and compelling photos. With most of your images here, they just don't hold our attention due to the almost lack of subject matter. Looking at them again, I think if you were to re-process your Almost White images making better choices in LR these could stand. They certainly have the most going on and the compositions are pretty nice. I would definitely convert them to B&W as the slight color in them both is not helping them. I would reshoot for Black and Gray. Good Luck!
Nice work overall! The almost white photos are natural in which they can just be taken without being edited. Th second almost grey photo is real in terms of craft and composition, however, it seems a little over edited. Perhaps take a photo of the same site in a different weather condition when it's foggy? The second almost black photo is natural, like your other photos, but still a bit blurry in terms of the subject matter.
ReplyDeleteHi Elizabeth. I think we covered most of my concerns in class on Tuesday. I would encourage you to continue to photograph and try to create much more interesting and compelling photos. With most of your images here, they just don't hold our attention due to the almost lack of subject matter. Looking at them again, I think if you were to re-process your Almost White images making better choices in LR these could stand. They certainly have the most going on and the compositions are pretty nice. I would definitely convert them to B&W as the slight color in them both is not helping them. I would reshoot for Black and Gray. Good Luck!
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