I think you have some good-looking photos here. I see that you have continued with the theme of abstractions with some of these photos which I think is a good thing and makes some of your photos look quite interesting. For example, I am not sure what I am looking at on photos 3, 4, and 5, which adds an interesting element. I find image number 3 to be my favorite - it is intriguing and there seems to be some movement that it captures. However, the main issue that I see here is that you are not experimenting with movement as much. Correct me if I am wrong, but I do not see any captured movement in images 2, 4, and 5. Perhaps you can keep the subject matter the same for one of them but try using camera movement (such as pan). Image 5 also stands out to me, I don't know why. So, if you will choose to keep that one, I would at least center it. I would also personally replace the first one, perhaps you can get a more interesting shot with the same subject matter - if not then at least try to do more with the editing. But overall, I think these images are not bad and I think some of them really stand out (that would be mainly image 3 for me).
Hi Eric. Yes, I agree. These are not very good. You need to create much more interesting and more compelling images. These are all so very dark and the subject matter is not visually interesting. You need to try harder and don't just focus on "a thing" moving, you must create a successful composition which you have not done in any of these. Your second and last images do not illustrate movement and your third and fourth images are out of focus, but not because of a slow shutter speed, but because of camera shake, which in turn, looks like a technical mistakes. If you need more help please let me know. Good Luck!
I think you have some good-looking photos here. I see that you have continued with the theme of abstractions with some of these photos which I think is a good thing and makes some of your photos look quite interesting. For example, I am not sure what I am looking at on photos 3, 4, and 5, which adds an interesting element. I find image number 3 to be my favorite - it is intriguing and there seems to be some movement that it captures. However, the main issue that I see here is that you are not experimenting with movement as much. Correct me if I am wrong, but I do not see any captured movement in images 2, 4, and 5. Perhaps you can keep the subject matter the same for one of them but try using camera movement (such as pan). Image 5 also stands out to me, I don't know why. So, if you will choose to keep that one, I would at least center it. I would also personally replace the first one, perhaps you can get a more interesting shot with the same subject matter - if not then at least try to do more with the editing. But overall, I think these images are not bad and I think some of them really stand out (that would be mainly image 3 for me).
ReplyDeleteHi Eric. Yes, I agree. These are not very good. You need to create much more interesting and more compelling images. These are all so very dark and the subject matter is not visually interesting. You need to try harder and don't just focus on "a thing" moving, you must create a successful composition which you have not done in any of these. Your second and last images do not illustrate movement and your third and fourth images are out of focus, but not because of a slow shutter speed, but because of camera shake, which in turn, looks like a technical mistakes. If you need more help please let me know. Good Luck!
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