I really like the photos using the slow shutter speed. I like the streak of light from the cars that pass by, but the light from the windows are still. My suggestions would be for the panning photos. I would suggest making the lights from the car pop more. You could add more saturation. In the second photo in the bulb set, the lights look a little blown out, so maybe bringing the highlight level down a little. Overall, I like the set of pictures you have!
Hi Zoe. I like the experimental approach, but would encourage you to try and formalize the composition and backgrounds. In other words, make them work together. For example, I don't think the backgrounds are supporting your movement, at least not visually. Sure if you see the moving subject as a car and the background as buildings on that same street, it all makes sense. But they aren't visually interesting. Again, I support this approach but would like to see the backgrounds take a more interesting role. Good Luck!
I really like the photos using the slow shutter speed. I like the streak of light from the cars that pass by, but the light from the windows are still. My suggestions would be for the panning photos. I would suggest making the lights from the car pop more. You could add more saturation. In the second photo in the bulb set, the lights look a little blown out, so maybe bringing the highlight level down a little. Overall, I like the set of pictures you have!
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe. I like the experimental approach, but would encourage you to try and formalize the composition and backgrounds. In other words, make them work together. For example, I don't think the backgrounds are supporting your movement, at least not visually. Sure if you see the moving subject as a car and the background as buildings on that same street, it all makes sense. But they aren't visually interesting. Again, I support this approach but would like to see the backgrounds take a more interesting role. Good Luck!
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