Hi Meile. These are a nice start with your second image the clear winner! That image is so beautifully composed with all the lines and shapes. Well Done! I would strengthen it with better editing in LR. Perhaps more contrast with dark blacks and brighter whites. The other images are heading in the right direction but need more dynamic light and a better sense of balance. I would suggest grabbing your camera and creating some new images to replace these. Use early morning or late afternoon light where it is raking across the surface. Good Luck!
I find some of your images here to be quite creative. I like how in image 2 the lines are pointing in different directions and they keep you looking at the photo longer. I personally do not think that images 1 looks that interesting, partially because the viewer can generally tell what they are looking at. Personally, I find image 4 to be the most interesting. I think you did a good job finding something that has only three colors but yet has lots of shapes and interesting texture. If it were up to me, I would keep this one. Also, if you are going to keep the last image then I would crop it or realign it to make it look more proportional. Good job overall though.
Hi Meile. These are a nice start with your second image the clear winner! That image is so beautifully composed with all the lines and shapes. Well Done! I would strengthen it with better editing in LR. Perhaps more contrast with dark blacks and brighter whites. The other images are heading in the right direction but need more dynamic light and a better sense of balance. I would suggest grabbing your camera and creating some new images to replace these. Use early morning or late afternoon light where it is raking across the surface. Good Luck!
ReplyDeleteI find some of your images here to be quite creative. I like how in image 2 the lines are pointing in different directions and they keep you looking at the photo longer. I personally do not think that images 1 looks that interesting, partially because the viewer can generally tell what they are looking at. Personally, I find image 4 to be the most interesting. I think you did a good job finding something that has only three colors but yet has lots of shapes and interesting texture. If it were up to me, I would keep this one. Also, if you are going to keep the last image then I would crop it or realign it to make it look more proportional. Good job overall though.
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