Cece, What a cool set of pictures! I think these are really interesting! What kind of body of water are you near to get so many photos like this? Or was it just raining? Really cool set of photos using the reflections as a means of showing your photos. I think your strongest photo is your color one, it has a lot of interesting shapes and is really interesting. While I like the colors in your square picture, I'm not really sure on whether I think it's a strong photo currently. I think this is due to the way that the reflection looks smushed and a bit weird. Otherwise I think your photos are interesting, fun and use water in a fun way to twist the photos.
I like the way you are using the reflections off of water for this assignment. It is a different way to show abstractions. I think your weakest photo is your first photo. Not the photo graph itself, but I think trying to take more time to edit in light room and be more aggressive in your editing will help a lot with creating a better photo. Your most successful photo to me is your split tone photo. I like how you left the red sky kind of build from the white corner on the right to the dark corner on the left.
Hi Cece. We started to discuss these works after class on Tuesday. I think they are off to a solid start, however I wouldn't necessarily repeat the same approach for all 5 images. The reflection is particularly successful in the third, fourth and last image, but not in the others. I would turn your camera to a different subject and approach and diversify this group of images. Good Luck!
Cece,
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool set of pictures! I think these are really interesting! What kind of body of water are you near to get so many photos like this? Or was it just raining? Really cool set of photos using the reflections as a means of showing your photos. I think your strongest photo is your color one, it has a lot of interesting shapes and is really interesting. While I like the colors in your square picture, I'm not really sure on whether I think it's a strong photo currently. I think this is due to the way that the reflection looks smushed and a bit weird. Otherwise I think your photos are interesting, fun and use water in a fun way to twist the photos.
I like the way you are using the reflections off of water for this assignment. It is a different way to show abstractions. I think your weakest photo is your first photo. Not the photo graph itself, but I think trying to take more time to edit in light room and be more aggressive in your editing will help a lot with creating a better photo. Your most successful photo to me is your split tone photo. I like how you left the red sky kind of build from the white corner on the right to the dark corner on the left.
ReplyDeleteHi Cece. We started to discuss these works after class on Tuesday. I think they are off to a solid start, however I wouldn't necessarily repeat the same approach for all 5 images. The reflection is particularly successful in the third, fourth and last image, but not in the others. I would turn your camera to a different subject and approach and diversify this group of images. Good Luck!
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