Annalee, These photos are really cool. I think the one I'm most drawn to is your picture of the coin spinning. I think this photo shows movement in a way that is really interesting and really fun. I also liked the change in edit for the light painting picture as I think color makes it stand out much more. I think the framing of your last picture could have been done a bit differently as it currently is situated on the edge of the desk and I think it would be a nicer photo if we didn't have to see the edge of the desk. Also the movement of the dice doesn't really work for me as it doesn't seem like the organic or natural movement of a dice, which I think might've been more compelling. Best, Skylar
Annalee,
ReplyDeleteThese photos are really cool. I think the one I'm most drawn to is your picture of the coin spinning. I think this photo shows movement in a way that is really interesting and really fun. I also liked the change in edit for the light painting picture as I think color makes it stand out much more. I think the framing of your last picture could have been done a bit differently as it currently is situated on the edge of the desk and I think it would be a nicer photo if we didn't have to see the edge of the desk. Also the movement of the dice doesn't really work for me as it doesn't seem like the organic or natural movement of a dice, which I think might've been more compelling.
Best,
Skylar