I really enjoy this group of photos! The one that stood out to me the most was the vignette. I find them all very visually appealing and am not quite sure if I have any real constructive criticism or advice to give. The only thing I can think of is that your square photograph could be straightened out/leveled more to increase its appeal. Great work!
Hi Ananjan. I think you are off to a really solid start. We spoke during office hours today, so I won't go into a lot of details, however I think with a few more LR edits, some cropping and tweaking these could be nice images. I would replace the very blue image, as it doesn't have the depth that the other images have. Good luck!
I thought these were a great set of images. I particularly like the first, second and fourth photos as I think they are more compositionally interesting than the others. I also like the high contrast aspect of those photos. The most striking photo for me is the fourth photo. I feel like that photo has a good flow and there's enough difference in value to make it feel less repetitive. The third photo feels a little repetitive in the pattern. For the last photo, I might try cropping the left side or the bottom a little bit to bring more attention to the lines created by the shadows and beam. Overall, interesting images!
I really enjoy this group of photos! The one that stood out to me the most was the vignette. I find them all very visually appealing and am not quite sure if I have any real constructive criticism or advice to give. The only thing I can think of is that your square photograph could be straightened out/leveled more to increase its appeal. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ananjan. I think you are off to a really solid start. We spoke during office hours today, so I won't go into a lot of details, however I think with a few more LR edits, some cropping and tweaking these could be nice images. I would replace the very blue image, as it doesn't have the depth that the other images have. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteI thought these were a great set of images. I particularly like the first, second and fourth photos as I think they are more compositionally interesting than the others. I also like the high contrast aspect of those photos. The most striking photo for me is the fourth photo. I feel like that photo has a good flow and there's enough difference in value to make it feel less repetitive. The third photo feels a little repetitive in the pattern. For the last photo, I might try cropping the left side or the bottom a little bit to bring more attention to the lines created by the shadows and beam. Overall, interesting images!
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