These images are amazing. Your first photo really caught my attention and I love how much space is given to the black, it just looks so good and is so balanced! I would just crop or spot treat the image to get rid of the 'thing' in the top right corner of the photo. I love the dark space and that 'thing' in the corner distracts from the image. Same thing for the bottom left of the third photo. For the second and third photo, I think tilting the image slightly to make those vertical lines straighter would add a little bit to the image also - that's if I'm being really picky. Otherwise, these images .... chef's kiss.
Hi Laura. Your first couple images are really wonderful. I think you can strengthen them in LR and make them even more compelling, but they are a really nice start. Play around with the crop tool and make sure that you are very precise recognizing when the subject needs to be center, etc..Pay particular attention to the edges and corners. Your last two images are not as strong and I would make new works and replace those. Very nice start. Good Luck!
These images are amazing. Your first photo really caught my attention and I love how much space is given to the black, it just looks so good and is so balanced! I would just crop or spot treat the image to get rid of the 'thing' in the top right corner of the photo. I love the dark space and that 'thing' in the corner distracts from the image. Same thing for the bottom left of the third photo. For the second and third photo, I think tilting the image slightly to make those vertical lines straighter would add a little bit to the image also - that's if I'm being really picky. Otherwise, these images .... chef's kiss.
ReplyDeleteHi Laura. Your first couple images are really wonderful. I think you can strengthen them in LR and make them even more compelling, but they are a really nice start. Play around with the crop tool and make sure that you are very precise recognizing when the subject needs to be center, etc..Pay particular attention to the edges and corners. Your last two images are not as strong and I would make new works and replace those. Very nice start. Good Luck!
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